Wednesday, December 8, 2010

Parts of the Story-Freak the Mighty

What do you think was the initial action of the story? Be prepared to defend your answer. Mention at least two scenes of rising action and a major conflict in the story.

17 comments:

  1. I think the initial action was when Max's dad got out of prison, that he would want to kill his grandparents, and then run off with him, because he said he would promise to come back.

    Rising Actions
    1) When blade was throwing rocks at max and kevin
    2) When Killer Kane came into Max's room.

    And a major conflict was when Killer Kane choked Loretta Lee... DEAD

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  2. rise actioning is killer kane took max. another scene was when when they ran into the people in the sewer and they had a little fight. the major conflict is killer kane taking kevin away from gram and grim.

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  3. The initial action: Max's dad is taken to prison. (I know this b/c Max lives with his grandparents,)

    Two rising action scenes: Number1) When Max and Kevin are being pelted with rocks by Blade and his gang.
    Number 2) When Max is kidnapped by his dad on Christmas eve.
    The Major Conflict: The major conflict was that Max is troubled by the thought that he has seen his father murder his mother. Though he doesn't tell anyone for the whole story almost.
    But at the end he lets it all out when his dad is killing Loretta Lee.

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  4. I think that the Initial action was when max and Kevin first met in preschool. 1,scene of rising action is when Killer Kane chocked lariat lee. 2 when Kane and max where hiding under the table when the police came to the testaments. A major conflict in the story was when killer Kane came into the down under to pick up/ kid nap max.

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  5. I think the initial action was the part when max meets kevin and the fair gwen of air and they become friends.
    rising action
    I think the rising action was when max and kevin find loretta's purse and go to the new testaments and find loretta and Iggy and then they {loretta and iggy} think that max and kevin stole from loretta's purse.

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  6. I think the initial action of the story was when max met freak. Rising action #1 kevin and max get stuck in the muddy swamp. Rising action #2 when max says he saw his dad murder his mom. A major conflict when his dad puts his hand on maxs face.

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  7. the part that made it all start is when killer Kane kills max's mother, because without that killer Kane go's to jail and then escapes jail then finds max then run's away if that didn't start then nothing in the book would ever went in that direction the dark scary but very good ending, rising action, the part that start's the climax is the part where killer Kane drops his big dark dangerous hand, the major conflict is, killer Kane is taking max away from all and wants to run away with max to ether start a new life (doubt that) or wants to kill his son.

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  8. the initial action of the story is when max and kevin meet b/c that starts the book and if they had not have met then they would not have gone to the new tenements and the cops would not have gone to the tenements to look for max when his dad kidnaped him and maybe loretta and iggy might not have ratted cane out.1 of the scenes is when killer cane came down to the down under and kidnaped max.2 when loretta tried to un tie max and then killer cane strangles her to death. the major conflict is when killer cane kidnaped max.

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  9. I think that that the initial action was when killer cain went into the schol.The rising action is when his dad put's his hand over his face. The conflict was when killer cain came back from jail B/c killer cain was lying was lying to max he said he did not kill his mom but max said he saw him kill his mom and he also saw killer cain his dad choking lareta b/c lareta pushed his son max that is why killer cain choked lareta so now max no's his dad is a killer.

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  10. The initial conflict is Max and Kevin meet at the office when Loretta tried to save them.
    I think the conflict is that Max must overcome his feeling of being a "nothing", and he must learn to accept himself for who he is.

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  11. I think the initial action is when max mom died. rising action is when kane puts his hand on max face other rising action is when max dad choked Loretta. Major conflict is when max got kidnaped by his dad

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  12. initial action is when max mom dies. rising action is when killer Kane puts his hand on max's face. another scene is when max and kevin go in the sewer and they run to into people and they end fighting over a purse and then max and kevin run away with the purse. major conflict is when killer Kane takes kevin away grim and gram.

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  13. initial action is when the principal is talking to max.rising action is when the dad is hurting that girl.major conflict is when his dad kidnapped max

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  14. My initial action is if kevin and max didn't meet then the cops wouldn't know were to look for max's and laretta wouldn't of ratted them out.One scene is when killer cane puts his hand on max's face.Another scene is when killer cane strangles laretta.

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  15. My initial action is if kevin and max didn't meet then the cops wouldn't know were to look for max's and laretta wouldn't of ratted them out.One scene is when killer cane puts his hand on max's face.Another scene is when killer cane strangles laretta.

    Major conflict- Killer cane

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  16. I think the initial action of the story is when Max's dad went to jail.(i know this b/c Max left with his grandparents.)
    Two rising action scenes is when killer Kane puts his hand on to Max's face and when Blade and his Gang pelted Max with rocks. The major conflict was that Max is Troubled by the thought that he has seen his father Murder is Mother.

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  17. Initial action-is the part when Killer Kane kills Max's mom.

    Rising actions-#1) when Killer Kane puts his hands on max's face
    #2) when KIller Kane chokes Loretta

    Major conflict-when Killer Kane takes max's

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